Here are my suggestions for correct, simplified versions of the sentences in yesterday's lesson:
- People who live in cities face various problems.
- The problems that urban inhabitants face include a high cost of living, social problems, and poor air quality.
- People who live in cities face various problems.
- People who live in urban areas face various challenges.
- City life is much more challenging than many people are led to believe.
Notes:
- Sentences 1 and 3 were trying to communicate the same simple idea, so I used the same easy sentence for both.
- Notice that I removed the words 'dwelling' and 'denizen'. Don't try to show off with difficult words in your introduction.
- Notice how the verb 'face' is used: A face(s) B. For example: people face problems.
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