Can you see the mistakes in the following topic sentences?
- On the one hand, people facing different situation living in a city.
- The problems that urban inhabitants may face with are high cost of living, many kinds of social problems as well as poor air quality.
- People dwelling in cities are facing different kind of issues every day.
- On the one hand, the denizen need to face the challenge life in urban sprawl.
- The fantasy of high standard city life is infact faced with reality of many daily challenges.
Tip: the easiest way to improve these sentences is by simplifying them.
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