If you look at the official band descriptors for writing task 2, you'll find this phrase in the band 9 description for 'coherence and cohesion':
"uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention"
So how do you connect your ideas (cohesion) without attracting too much attention? I think there are 2 possible ways:
- Explain your ideas in a logical order so that you don't need many linking words. This is probably what you do when writing in your own language.
- Use easy linking and referencing words like and, but, because, which, that, this, while, for example. These are so common that they attract almost no attention.
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