In last Thursday's lesson I asked you to suggest where we could add one extra detail to my 'fish pie' answer. I had forgotten to write that the pie is in a microwaveable container.
People suggested two sensible places to add this detail.
1) At the beginning of paragraph 2:
The fish pie contains salmon, peas, sauce and potatoes in a microwaveable container.
2) In the last sentence of paragraph 4:
The resulting fish pies are placed in microwaveable containers, wrapped, frozen and then stored or dispatched.
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